feedback from teacher

we had our film reviewed by Miss Whittaker. There are some things that she said we need to improve and just some final adjustments. We removed two clips of writing that made it look like a trailer so now it reaches out to the audience and gives the movie more of a whats going to happen feel and adds suspense.  this gave us more time so we slowed down our production logo at the beginning of our film so people are more aware of it. we also moved our writing in the film to the edges more because researching other films thats what they seem to do.

deadline opening sequence final

feedback from teacher

we had our film reviewed by Miss Whittaker. There are some things that she said we need to improve and just some final adjustments. We removed two clips of writing that made it look like a trailer so now it reaches out to the audience and makes them think what is going to happen. once we removed that this gave us more time so we could slow down our writing at the beginning so it is more readable to the audience. we could also slow down our production logo so people can see more of the detail of what it is and what it says. we also got told to move our titles around so we moved them to the corners.

Audience Research/Feedback

For our audience research we have found out that the key audience and our main audience target is teenagers aged between 15-19.

The gender for our film 'Deadline' would be male because it has features in the film that would mainly attract a male audience to go and watch the film, for examples guns and zombies.
We asked these questions to 3 people and the feedback for them follows:
1. Are you male or female?

A) MaleB) Female
C) Male
2. How old are you?

A) 17

B) 17

C) 16

3. Do you prefer English films or foreign films?

A) Foreign Films

B) Foreign Films

C) Foregin Films

4. What genre of film do enjoy best?

A) Horror

B) Comedy

C) Action

5. What would you expect to see in a horror zombie film?

A) Guns

B) Death

C) Blood
6. What did you think that 'Deadline' has that makes its opening sequence?

A) The Music

B) Sound Effects

C) Sound Effects 
7. Do you think the time length for the opening sequence is too long?

A) No, it starts and stops in a mystery

B) No, i think it needs to be longer

C) Yes, it could be shortened
8. What do you think could be improved?

A) The pace of the character running

B) The use of clothing and props

C) The length of time
9. Is there anything you would add to make the opening sequence better?

A) Add a zombie into the sequence to show what they are running from

B) Make the running scenes shorter

C) Have more angled camera shots
10. Is there anything you would take out of the sequence to make it better?

A) Some of the running scenes

B) Some of the running scenes

C) Some of the running scenes