feedback from teacher

we had our film reviewed by Miss Whittaker. There are some things that she said we need to improve and just some final adjustments. We removed two clips of writing that made it look like a trailer so now it reaches out to the audience and gives the movie more of a whats going to happen feel and adds suspense.  this gave us more time so we slowed down our production logo at the beginning of our film so people are more aware of it. we also moved our writing in the film to the edges more because researching other films thats what they seem to do.

feedback from teacher

we had our film reviewed by Miss Whittaker. There are some things that she said we need to improve and just some final adjustments. We removed two clips of writing that made it look like a trailer so now it reaches out to the audience and makes them think what is going to happen. once we removed that this gave us more time so we could slow down our writing at the beginning so it is more readable to the audience. we could also slow down our production logo so people can see more of the detail of what it is and what it says. we also got told to move our titles around so we moved them to the corners.